That is deep, the she seems to almost feel guilty that the others are coming to save her, even though she is scared. How you said how she dreaded to see tib. Also your descriptions are so good, describing it all, her friends, the cracking ice.
That particular phrase, backlit monster is very creative, it really evokes the picture of what she is looking at! Really great job making the reader feel like she is in her shoes.
Olive is too good for this world what the fuck
Olive gets therapy thank god
"There was a tangible thrum in her veins, a rush of blood, and the thrill of being fully understood and held." adding this to my tattoo list ffs
"This is what it feels like to be alive." love it
benry doesn't deserve her
I love olive and her divine path
when i tell u i wheeze d-
I'm all for this romance right now! Urg your writing is too beautiful, PLEASE STOP IT
"Take heed," she bade him, without greeting or softness to her voice. "A devil crawls amongst these grasses."
Olive... Olive... He's just trying to rest.
I just wanna say I really like Olive and character itself, I didn't get the chance to see her that much on a different site, so i'm very glad to see her, and you're writing! She holds this mysterious allure I adore.
omg Olive is too gosh darn sweet and I love her
Olive is such a sweetheart omg
olibe my sweet summer sister,,
olibe my sweet summer sister,,
